Mr. Pacione seems to have missed a few reviews at FictionPress for “Leviathan’s Ghost.” We all know about his obsession with deleting any negative comments, yet, these remain.
No offense, but don’t quit your day job. You repeat words too often in description and do not expand into use of more colorful metaphors in order to paint your mental picture.
Oh, honey. If you want colorful metaphors, read his blogs. And, he doesn’t have a day job.
You had a great opening line, but unfortunately it went downhill from there. Your punctuation is awful and you skip tenses, something which is disorientating in the best of stories.
Please state the obvious.
I know you might be angry at this, coming from one of your “proteges” as you have called me, but I do think you can be a lot better as a writer and as a person, from what I’ve read people say. Like I said, I’m very fortunate to only see one side of Nickolaus Pacione, and I dread the other side of you.
Kyle did meet the other side of Pacione. He had to abandon a blog his parents used to read when Pacione started leaving nasty comments all over it.
You need help on how to write better, because most of your works are so grammatically bad that you need to re-write them. WHy don’t you ever listen to anyone who gives advice? You don’t bother to listen, you just throw a tantrum whenever someone doesn’t like your work. I tried to help you, but you insist on ignoring what I have to say.
Sadly, that is how so many of Pacione’s enemies bumped into him.
I only read about two paragraphs of this…this, until my eyes started bleeding and my keyboard up and raped itself. Now, this story would be a lot bette if I knew:a) What the hell was going onb) Why I should careSeriously, there’s no feeling because the description is vague and very…well, it’s not descriptive.
That first line still has me in stitches. The rest of it is standard-issue honest remarks.
Speaking of comments that don’t see the light of day, dear old Nicky went and put up (yet another) video of him flipping off the camera. Feeling like he needed to be reminded of the good times, I decided to post a reply. And remember, it’s the season of giving.
I said what, what, in the butt…
I said what, what, in the butt…
etc. etc.
Good idea with the screen grab. He’ll never approve those remarks.
I’m surprised that any of them survived. there were a great many negative comments on the Fandom Writer, but i have no idea whether they are still there at this point.
Those are still there.
You know he’s going to accuse you of using Soulseek to….
OMG E-PIRATE MY WORK!!!! WHY WON’T YOU LET ME ENJOY BEING A PUBLISHED AUTHOR????
(By the way, may I humbly recommend the Pearl Crescent Firefox add-on? It grabs the entire page, even what’s scrolled off of the screen, and lets you save it as a .JPG or .PNG, and it shows only the contents of the browser window.)
Here’s a screenshot of the reviews before he deletes them.
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/2559/reviewsforleviathansghojs8.jpg
At annnnnnnnny rate….Can you imagine the indignity of Nicky calling you one of his “proteges”?
The Screengrab! extension does the same thing, but it also allows for just a selected area to be captured. I find it very useful.
Someone reviewed:
“It keeps my attention through it all…”
How? How the f**c is that even possible?
I swear, when I read his dreck, my eyes start skipping all over the screen like they’re separate entities who absolutely refuse to be subjected to that kind of abuse.
I’m just far too lazy to install anything on my computer that’s not a neat game or absolutely essential to something I’m doing. srsly